Someone had asked a good question about scripts, generally there is no one way to write a script, and can be done in many ways. Thou I think an idea would go along way to making it easier for everyone who are just learning the in's and out's of writing. So below is an example of writing i get from Doc Robo.

Most of my scripts are outlines for myself, doc usually likes to give me to separate files one for what's going on and the second after i've render the pages, the dialogue. so it something like this.

1) have heroine fall into specific trap or device
2) close up of heroine being mind controlled.
3) heroine and villain making out.

and then dialogue is added based on what i rendered. I do about 20 to 30 pages docs like making 12 or 14 pages and some have multi panels in it so he would make a few extra lines and state those are to be added to page 3.


1) have heroine fall into specific trap or device.
A) have her struggle
B) have said villian or machine turn on the mind control effect
C) quick shot of her slowly falling into mind control effect.
2) close up of heroine being mind controlled.
3) heroine and villain making out.


I will also be taking the time to make new characters for Commission use as noted by another that more choices couldn't hurt

Tek~